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Life Without You
Contributed by
requiemforadream
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:35:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A life with out you doesn’t exist
My soul and heart belong to you
You are the air I breathe
You are the food that nourishes my soul
Through all of my nonsense you have always stuck
You are always there for me no matter what
I have hurt you before but I never will again
My love for you will never end
You always bring a giddy smile to my face
Even if your words lose your normal eloquent grace
I count the days until we can wed
And live for the day we wake together in bed
I long to look into your deep blue eyes
And kiss your lips at the morning sun’s first touch
I think of nights out in the cold
Cuddling around a fire even when we are old
So many things that we can do
Life could only be boring with out you
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requiemforadream
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2004-11-17 19:35:36]
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Re: Life Without You
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:19:19 PM AEST
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that was a really sweet and sincere poem, it's easy to see how much you love her...I hope it lasts friend =)...a very good write to be proud of!
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Re: Life Without You
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:44:41 AM AEST
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Bravo! Sounds like you've a good thing, my friend! May it last always.
And keep that pen moving.
Andrew |
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Re: Life Without You
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 10:09:53 PM AEST
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True devotion was spilled onto the page when you wrote this.
Beautiful. |
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Re: Life Without You
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 10:09:54 PM AEST
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True devotion was spilled onto the page when you wrote this.
Beautiful. |
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