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You Lost
Contributed by
LayDownPlayDead
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Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 10:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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How can you tell me your care if you don't? You said you would call, you never did. If you said you wouldn't tell anybody then why does the world know? Oh yea, it sounds like you really care. I thought you were there for me but I was so wrong. You never cared, you still don't. There's so little that you said to me that is true. I wish you would've just told me that you didn't care. But no, you couldn't do that but you could go behind my back and tell my feelings to everyone. I can't talk to you anymore and that kills me, I hate it so much. But if you're going to tell unwanted people about my pain I can't talk to you. You lost my trust, and to think that I called you my friend. Oh, I'll just pretend. We'll be great. I'll be wonderful to you but really I'll be dying inside. Now I have to lie to you like I do with everyone else, I'm sorry, you lost.
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Re: You Lost
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 11:55:40 PM AEST
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| Sometimes its hard to trust someone with your feelings,next time you will know! I hope you can find a true one! Christina |
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Re: You Lost
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by OreO on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 11:37:17 AM AEST
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I myself am a very trusting
person and it get's harder each
time to trust the more people
walk on my friendship the way
they do. This is such a sad write
maybe you should show this to
your friend.. it might make t hem think
Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: You Lost
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 07:14:55 PM AEST
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| Marc: Not everyone is like that. I promise you. There are people who are trustworthy and make mistakes, but try to forgive and move on. Then there are times where the people whom you trust the most are the ones that hurt you the most, but that happens because you allow friends to "get inside of your heart" and when they stab you, the wound hits you directly without any skin as protection. I'm sorry. I am not very good with metaphors and may have ruined that attempt. |
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