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Live Then Die
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:52:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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bring me to this realization,
this hell within.
words cannot tell how wretched i am
passing down the halls you breathe
i speak of the devil,
and nothing more
of murder and sin
darkness flows in my veins
taunting me to cut and let them flow free
to stain the sheets and lifes eyes.
watch me as i cut
slice my wrists
watch me live
then watch me die.
Copyright ©
TwEeK
... [
2004-11-17 17:52:42]
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Re: Live Then Die
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 06:00:17 PM AEST
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| okee dokee then. c-ya. what am i supposed to say? good write? hardly soounds appropriate..duh! |
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Re: Live Then Die
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 06:02:56 PM AEST
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| another question..is that the same razor that gets used to chop up the cocaine bloke? does it mix with the blood and do ya get all high .. just wonderin.. |
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Re: Live Then Die
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by lynley83 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 06:12:41 PM AEST
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| i loved it....the best poetry comes from someone who suffers |
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Re: Live Then Die
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by TwEeK on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 06:27:34 PM AEST
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"the best poetry comes from someone who suffers"
lol
oh god, that was the 1st time i had a good laugh in a long time!
thanks guys, i needed a good laugh..
-Tweek
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Re: Live Then Die
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by lynley83 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:15:21 PM AEST
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| ok fine then...nevermind |
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