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Let Me Out
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:36:03 PM in AEST
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I wish I could be anywhere
But where I am right now
Climb into another’s skin
Change my face somehow
Life’s become predictable
I miss how it was back then
Every day a new adventure
I couldn’t wait to let begin
Oh, free me from these prison walls
Let me dance beside a fire
Throw caution to the winds
That carry weary spirits higher
Take from me these burdens
And this mantle’s heavy weight
Or schedule an appointment
I want to meet with Fate
Much, there is that I would say
I’d so hate to sound crass
Instead I think I wish I could
Just kick Fate in the ~
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Nazmythian
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Re: Let Me Out
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:42:25 PM AEST
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boodie? lol..
just be a little nutt
kick fate in the butt
great write..I feel the same way sometimes..I guess we all do. shakled by the chains of obligation..and I want to escape but I don't have a hack saw..sigh. But..I have my dreams and..you. There's always a bright side. |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:47:14 PM AEST
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Fate needs a little kicking once in a while.
When I started school, the first couple of weeks it felt fresh every day. Now it's starting to get old already!
Oh well. Another semester, another new start.
Maybe it's all the caution in the wind that keeps bringing me all these clouds? :-)
Cheers! |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:48:17 PM AEST
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Lovely Naz.
I really like this in a personal way.
A treasure.
--Mothy |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:10:39 PM AEST
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lol..perfect
Barkeep!!
Larry |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:16:01 PM AEST
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Naz,
I really like this poem as it's one I, and apparently others, can really relate to. I often get in a rut. For me, I'm probably the one that needs the kick in the butt.
Enjoyed the write.
Willofree |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:33:06 PM AEST
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Oh Nazzy... we all feel this way sometimes, I think. I know I do! I absolutely do.
But, Fate is a funny girl. She lingers in places where you'd least expect to find her. You'll bump into her sooner or later. In the meantime, go ahead and dance. Why ever not, I say!
Knowing,
SNM |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:59:57 AM AEST
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*hugs Naz*
Wow, can't we all relate to this? I think so.
Sometimes all everyone wants is just to be free.
I understand...
*hugs you tons*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by Spike on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 05:27:07 AM AEST
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Amen, fellow scribe. What could have been a mounful dirge is lifted by a pinch of humour. The sentiments are not distilledby the mix, though.
Much too familiar with my own predicament.....
Spike |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by pixie on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 09:58:59 AM AEST
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wow Naz this is wonderful, give it a kicking from me lololol
pixie xx |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:46:39 PM AEST
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Ah, the reckless cry for freedom... Beautiful piece! A yearning to break free from the seemingly endless corridor of bleak everyday life... To be someone else, to take off the chains and fly... Oh, how I wish for this as well... Despair, longing for release, and a touch of humour... Excellent choices, dear Scott! One in a million. A wonderful yet morbid write; struck a few chords... I hope your wish for freedom will come true... No one deserves to be left in a cage, never experiencing the refreshing air of liberty... Exquisite piece. Loved it!! Much love and hugs! Forever,
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Re: Let Me Out
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:59:36 PM AEST
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How wonderfully you express yourself through verse, dear poet.
So many of your poems are deeply moving to me for
so many reasons. I thank you for sharing your gift.
Of your endless and wondrous talent, I shall never tire.
~Breezy |
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