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Not Enough Words
Contributed by
outsider
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Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Not enough stars in the heavens that shine
To bestow all the love in this heart of mine
Not enough words that existed through time
To describe such feeling so utterly sublime.
Add up all the love in the world that exists
From all the weddings and relationships
To teenage fumbling and midnight trysts
Doesn’t come close to such feeling as this.
In darkness there is no beacon but you
A light on my path that’s steady and true
Brighter than sunlight and stronger than glue
Generous wondrous beautiful you.
Copyright ©
outsider
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2002-11-21 21:45:00]
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Re: Not Enough Words
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by springchic1979 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 11:30:48 PM AEST
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What a beautiful touching poem, outsider. I loved it. :)
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Re: Not Enough Words
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 12:04:20 AM AEST
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this poem is great considering the tough rhymes that you had to come up with (and did a beautiful job with too) ..
the only thing that i am puzzled about is "doesn't" ... i can't decide whether grammatically if "don't" would be the correct choice... hmmmmmmm
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Re: Not Enough Words
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by outsider on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 03:44:20 AM AEST
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| Hi, "don't" would work just as well I think, "but doesn't" is what popped out of my head when I was writing and I was satisfied that it looked ok to me. Thanks for the comment :)) |
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Re: Not Enough Words
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by Lovingangel4u on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 08:53:02 PM AEST
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Another brilliant poem sweetheart. Truly wonderful, just like you.
ILUD
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