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A Grain of Sand, A Drop of Rain
Contributed by
justjonesy
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:21:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm hiding beneath your fingernail
I'm just another grain of sand
So let me join the countless others
and please, rinse your hand
I share a goodbye
with a friend whose fate I see in me
He's a drop of rain already falling
and will shortly join the sea
Copyright ©
justjonesy
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2004-11-17 17:21:30]
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Re: A Grain of Sand, A Drop of Rain
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by mysticpoet on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:27:08 PM AEST
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| I like your poem, It's very good. I don't know if it's a love lost, unless the grains of sand are his countless loves that he has had and your friend was one of them like you. |
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Re: A Grain of Sand, A Drop of Rain
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:33:13 PM AEST
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| I was intreagued by the title..and the concept is wonderful.. so glad I gave it a read. Thumbs up..both of em..big toes too..lol! |
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Re: A Grain of Sand, A Drop of Rain
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by Spike on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 05:11:55 AM AEST
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Pretty intriguing - I like the metaphysical imagery within the desire to return to the collective all. Are we just looking for an excuse? I wonder. Good write.
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Re: A Grain of Sand, A Drop of Rain
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by girltranscended on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:45:19 PM AEST
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what an opening line!
and WOW how eactly can you be under someone's fingernail but still able to tell them what to do?
*thinks to herself that sounds sarcastic and so notes that it's not
And hiding, there's an intreging choice of words.
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