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Live with Agreements
Contributed by
matt73
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 04:41:02 PM in AEST
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Today, the hours will watch
the minutes play tic
and the seconds play toc
Today, patience will dance
with good intention
to a song with end
Today, morals will sit up straight
center their reasons
to impress our thinking
Today, depression will walk in public
pickpocket innocence
side step question
Today, regret will plant reminders
water adolescent fear
sprout anger
Tonight, I will sleep with tic and toc
let patience rest and morals talk
Tonight depression will be generous
tomorrow, Ill ask for lenience
Live with agreements.
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2004-11-17 16:41:02]
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Re: Live with Agreements
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by namesaretaken on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:26:18 PM AEST
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I just loved this one Iam going to have to read it a few more times.
When I reading it seems like there is way more to the poem than I am currently getting
anyway my fav lines where
Today, depression will walk in public
pickpocket innocence
side step question
Just great!!! |
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Re: Live with Agreements
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:48:10 AM AEST
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Impressive stuff. Thoughtful and well written.
Stitch |
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