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Blood Flower & Dark Hunter: The Hunt.
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 04:31:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkness, immortal...
Kiss, eternal...
Spent maids all in a row...
Reckless in their need of fulfilling fantasies...
He stands in the middle of all the amid utters,
Impatience clears on his handsome face...
Embellished in rich velvets,
Dark greens and earthy browns...
All contrasting beautifully with his honey-green eyes…
His attire screamed of wealth...
Searching for an escape,
Yearning for a breath,
His precious eyes came across my shadowed form...
A sparkle of satisfaction twinkled in those heavenly orbs,
Drinking in every detail of me...
The bothersome whores sensed his decision was made,
And scattered in different directions,
Probing for others to calm their desires...
He strode, no, glided towards me,
A playful little smile forming at the corners of his fine mouth...
Oh, how I ached for him,
For his soft touch, his enchanting kiss...
Without words,
I took his immaculate hand,
And guided him to the most elegant room we had...
Drenched in obscurity,
Our heavy breathing talking amongst each other,
Senses tingling with anticipation...
Hands wandering, groping, caressing, tearing,
Gentle scrutiny became a frenzied feast...
Tongues clashing with one another,
Teeth nibbling on flesh...
The beast within me rose,
Awaking with a frightful howl...
I couldn't stand it any longer…
La Ardeur had fallen upon me mercilessly,
And it had to be fed...
Bodies fully exposed,
The lovely Luna adorning our pallid skin with Her luminosity...
His eyes were heavy with desire,
Breath warm and inviting on my cheek…
A low moan emitted from his lips as I placed my wet kisses on his elegant neck...
I could feel his pulse quickening,
Throbbing under my hungry lips...
La Ardeur, fully awakened,
Took over me, blinding me...
My eyelids fluttered,
Catching a glimpse of my new Protégé,
My eternal lover,
Slumbering sweetly in my arms...
Ready to teach him the ways of our kind,
To show him my malevolent and obscure realm…
Such a blissful Melodie,
The screams we evoked from the mouths of the wretched maids,
Ridding them of all their sins,
Perceiving their lives, fears, desires…
Drowning in ecstasy,
Floating atop crimson waves,
Relishing this new existence,
Casting a dark shadow across the unsuspecting world…
The hunt has begun,
And shall go on forevermore…
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2004-11-17 16:31:29]
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Re: Blood Flower & Dark Hunter: The Hunt.
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by MysticFireFairy on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:00:23 PM AEST
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The poem was magnificient and well told you have alot of talent...
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Re: Blood Flower & Dark Hunter: The Hunt.
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 06:25:39 PM AEST
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She has been touched by inspiration ... lovely !! Beautifully scripted. Enthralled with your direction. Intrigued with what comes next ... ?
Nazmythian ~
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Re: Blood Flower & Dark Hunter: The Hunt.
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 06:28:14 PM AEST
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good Lord what a creepy, yet beautifully poetic write. I loved this and am in awe.
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Re: Blood Flower & Dark Hunter: The Hunt.
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by a_bear on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 06:58:14 PM AEST
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Our heavy breathing talking amongst each other,
shouldn't that be talking amongst ourselves? otherwise..it sounds like you're in a group setting LOL ..or are you..oops. otherwise I love it. |
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