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Two Faced
Contributed by
GothicHollie
on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 04:11:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The day i Met you
It became so Clear
That you would be the one
To wipe away my Tears
The day i fell in Love with you
I finally believed you Cared
You held me in your arms
I was no longer Scared
The day you Betrayed me
Is the day i'll never Forget
The day i Died
A day lived in Regret
That Day i found out
Nothing was Real
That day i realized
I could no longer Heal
You were Fake
And so was I
All an illusion
To compliment this Lie
Today i stand here
Pretending to be You
Passing down the lessons
I learned from You.
Copyright ©
GothicHollie
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2004-11-17 16:11:01]
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Re: Two Faced
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by namesaretaken on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:29:31 PM AEST
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I liked this alot
It kind of remindes me of songs by a band called His Infernal Majesty or HIM
good stuff |
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Re: Two Faced
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 08:24:53 PM AEST
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amazin poem, very good write
Jenni xxoo |
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Re: Two Faced
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by Inevitable on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 08:38:24 PM AEST
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| Sounds vaguely familiar...good poem |
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Re: Two Faced
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by DirtyFool on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:02:42 PM AEST
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Great poem! I hope your pain stops. Keep up the writing!
*hugs*
Dirtyfool |
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Re: Two Faced
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:00:43 AM AEST
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| good write... |
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Re: Two Faced
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 08:09:54 PM AEST
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A story I know all to well, and hear all the time. *sigh* when will men larn to treat ladies with the respect that they deserve?
Very well expressed, 5 stars because 10 is not allowed. |
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Re: Two Faced
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:13:04 PM AEST
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Wow...
Awesome write. |
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