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No one here
Contributed by
row
on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 03:52:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Where to go
Who to tell
What to leave
When it fell
No one here
No one there
No one to see
and No one to care
Copyright ©
row
... [
2004-11-17 15:52:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: No one here
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mesano on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 04:11:37 PM AEST (User
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short, but deep... if you are anything like me and most other poets, and you write whats in your head, i can only imagine what may have happened to cause you to write that... if this is true, i wish you the best...great poem
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Re: No one here
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stej on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:24:36 AM AEST (User
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it's sad to hear that you don't feel like there's anyone there for you rowz- don't forget that some people care about you more than you think
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Re: No one here
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dizza_13 on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:41:42 PM AEST (User
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good write here. short and deep, very well done. I look
forward to reading more of your poetry. keep em
comin
dizza |
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