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FIELDS
Contributed by
AliB
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:44:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Fields come in all shapes and sizes
Are used for growing crops
Allow animals like sheep and horses
To graze until they drop
With barbed wire round the outside
To keep animals in, predators out
A stile for you to climb over
To help you get about
But the fields I love the most
Are high in wheat and corn
Great for messing and fooling around in
On a warm and sunny morn!
Copyright ©
AliB
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2004-11-17 14:44:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: FIELDS
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:51:16 PM AEST (User
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i like fields i like them lots,
i see them every day,
i like best the farmers fields,
and rolling in his hay!
lol lol lol keep writing!
Johnny. |
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Re: FIELDS
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 03:29:37 PM AEST (User
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cool write..i have been there |
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Re: FIELDS
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 04:15:56 PM AEST (User
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Nice, Ali.
I like barley fields on summer sunsets. I'm not much into cow fields, for they're littered with cow pats, obviously. Ruined many a cool pair of trainers, I can say! lol.
Keep writing. |
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Re: FIELDS
(User Rating: 1 ) by dtborchert on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 07:36:51 AM AEST (User
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Wonderful whimsy! I am still smiling! |
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Re: FIELDS
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dawny on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:14:53 AM AEST (User
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Well personally, I like to stay in bed as long as possible...so you won't catch me rolling in the corn fields lol
Nice poem, brings back memories of warmer days brrrrrrrr
Love Dawny xxx |
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Re: FIELDS
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lionel on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 10:53:16 AM AEST (User
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Sounds like a country boy's poem. I'm one too, and I like them too. Enjoyed it. God bless |
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