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walk alone
Contributed by
kaosar
on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:49:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I wait for you
to come and talk
I wait for you
to share my walk
but you don't come
I talk to stone
and you don't share
I walk alone
In all my life
I wait for a friend
but every beginning
must have an end
no matter where
in the world you are
no matter how
long and far
I'll always call
and tell you I care
I'll always be
waiting .. there
I check my email
everyday I do
but always the same
nothing from you
I think of you
and need to cry
but how do I
you're not nearby
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kaosar
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2004-11-17 13:49:56]
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Re: walk alone
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by neglected1 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:53:11 PM AEST
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... wonderful write.. its hard having a friend that cant share times with you.. but its better than not having a friend at all isnt it?..
i enjoyed reading this.. your words flow very nicely
~neglected1~ |
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Re: walk alone
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:53:26 PM AEST
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awwww maybe you should show this poem to your friend *hugs* it was very emotional and sad,
pixie xx |
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Re: walk alone
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:29:41 PM AEST
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i feel this way sometime about my best friend....sometimes i feel as tho hes never there no matter how bad i need him....this is an excellent poem...great write
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: walk alone
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by N0body on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 04:01:20 PM AEST
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| I liked it, but i think if you got rid of 'i check me e-mail....' stanza, it would improve your poem. Gj! |
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Re: walk alone
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:41:07 PM AEST
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absolutely gorgeous, i love this poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: walk alone
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 09:45:22 AM AEST
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| a less complex format that somehow still conveys a wonderfully sad message...well done! |
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