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a day dream of murder
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:42:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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a masacre in my head day dreaming about killing us dead,
it would be cool because he dont want to die,i would point that gun at him and listen to him cry,plead and ask me why!,
just like i do when i hurt,blow your head off and call you dirt!
then i would find the time to sit and rewind and think of all the good times we had,look in the barrel and realize life is bad,and end it all,bloody on the ground i fall never to return,
he goes to heaven i go to hell where forever i will burn.
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Re: a day dream of murder
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by neglected1 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:57:30 PM AEST
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Ouch.. yes, very much an angry daydream.. and i hope you wouldnt actually go through with doing anything remotly like this... but it made for a great write.. i enjoyed it very much..
one suggestion though.. re-read your peoms before you post them.. is the title a day dream of murder?
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Re: a day dream of murder
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by BlindSuicide on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:58:33 PM AEST
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Whoa... that poem was very deep i felt your anger and your pain all at once..but perhaps you should have put that under Dark poetry lol. Still it is a great write short and straight to the point. Very well expressed.
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Re: a day dream of murder
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by Unheard_Mute on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 04:18:21 PM AEST
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| Who's the guy you're mad at? Oh, good write too |
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