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Black As Coal
Contributed by
apcfan
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:23:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Im lying in this grave that I have dug for myself
He says I hold the key to my future...
but really what is my future
They scream and shout
Your not good enough
Youll never make it
Your just a narcissisitic little bit**
They scream and shout
"if I die its you fault"
But is it really...
Im lying in this bed full of nails and regret
I'm just a misfit doll
you can poke me
you can prick me
you can punch me
you can slap me
you can stab me
you can rape me
you can beat me til Im bloody
But....I....Don't....Feel....A....Thing
Cause my heart is black as coal
My heart is just a black hole
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apcfan
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2004-11-17 13:23:42]
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Re: Black As Coal
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:30:50 PM AEST
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dark and so sad, *hugs* hope your next poem will be a happy one,
takecare,
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Re: Black As Coal
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by savedbydeath on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:21:30 PM AEST
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terrific write,no worried homez i know how u feel,1 day ur black heart will been taken over with the colour red,BRIGHT RED,my hand is out to u anytime u need a friend,or a lift up to cloud nine
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