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Tears behind the music

Contributed by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:29:30 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



I'll dabble away the tears,
Till the tissue is no longer dry,
As the music plays a counter melody,
To the sorrow in my eyes.

And I'll listen to the words,
To the story of my life,
As the guy behind the song,
Seems to sing behind my eyes.

I'll listen to his words...
And I'll cry a little more each time...


And I'll remember all these feelings,
My heart pounding through my veins,
And as I fall into the music...
I'll close my eyes again...

And as memories return to me,
The tears will still remain,
As he sings to me my story,
I'll lose my thoughts in you again...

I'll weep to his words...
But no tissue will wipe my tears away...


Because I need to cry...




Copyright © lostinmyself ... [ 2004-11-17 12:29:30]
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Re: Tears behind the music (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:32:19 PM AEST
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I would say that you are one of the best writers of emotional poetry on this whole site , you really throw yourself into your poems, they deserve to be read by millions, this is a very emotional and very deep write, you have layed yourself bare in this write, wonderfully expressed, *hugs*

love pixie xx


Re: Tears behind the music (User Rating: 1 )
by BlindSuicide on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:03:39 PM AEST
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Yes very great write..very emotional and very self explained. Strangely i can relate in a few ways..many songs i listen to inspire me to write and many songs i listen to cause me to cry. Your not alone.

~Alucia~


Re: Tears behind the music (User Rating: 1 )
by sabrina on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:08:56 PM AEST
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That was sooooo amazing...I absolutely loved it. You are a unique poetry writer...I wish I could write like that!!! I love the emotion put into it, I definitely felt emotinon through it, very powerful!...AMAZING job on the poem..I think that is by far the best poem I have read....
GREAT JOB

~Sabrina


Re: Tears behind the music (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:35:03 PM AEST
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wow Phil, you are so emotional lately.
I hope you are well, but this is just another example of the awsome writes coming out of you!


Re: Tears behind the music (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:49:38 PM AEST
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I say philly that is one of the best poems i read .hugs.


Re: Tears behind the music (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:08:04 PM AEST
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Delicate.

I have to say I was thoroughly moved by this all the way until the last line, where I expected it to rhyme along with the rest . . . and was kinda left hanging on for more.

But no bother - that's an aside of my nitpickyness.

Keep writing, Phil.


Re: Tears behind the music (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:29:50 PM AEST
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how about "Because I Need To Cry"?..
It's amazing..I loved it.


Re: Tears behind the music (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 06:51:33 AM AEST
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Again, you have bested yourself. Your poetry shows a polish and maturity that grows with each new post. Very impressed.
Stitch


Re: Tears behind the music (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 02:49:53 AM AEST
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Phil this is just totally AMAZING!
I love your style more every time i
read more of your poetry.
This is very deep and emotional,
I can relate to this as there are a couple
of songs that can just make me burst
into tears.
I love this poem so much,
It has got to be one of my favourite poems.

*hugs you*
You take care now
*hugs you again*

Love
Stace x


Re: Tears behind the music (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:15:58 PM AEST
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absolutely a gorgeous write... hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-


Re: Tears behind the music (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:12:27 AM AEST
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WOW! What a powerful, emotional write. Excellent job. *S* Cynthia


Re: Tears behind the music (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 07:31:52 AM AEST
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Music is someone's heart composed into a melody. I think that is why it touches us often. I try to imagine the hurt or love or whatever the composer was feeling when he sat down to write the score.

You write so well Lost. We all need to cry at times.

"As he sings to me my story,
I'll lose my thoughts in you again..."

Beautiful...

Kie





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