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Will You Dance On My Grave?
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:19:02 PM in AEST
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Will you dance of my grave when I die?
Will you stick up two fingers instead of goodbye?
Will you spit all over my headstone,
Will you cut the grass when it becomes overgrown?
As I lay there in my coffin six foot under,
Will your laughter be heard I wonder?
Or now I’m dead will you at last leave me be,
Can I say from you that I will ever be free?
Please let me pass over into the next world in peace,
Go & play with someone who’s alive, not deceased,
You had your fun with me when I was alive,
You had more pleasure than honey bees in a hive.
As my cold, dead corpse lays there so still,
Are you that cruel, are you really that disturbed & ill,
That you will even now abuse my body as it rots,
No longer do I want to a part of your sick plots.
I am meant to be at rest in an eternal sleep,
But from my peaceful destiny you will me forever keep,
I am dead now, no longer one of your play things,
It is well & truly over, listen as the raven sings.
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Re: Will You Dance On My Grave?
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:30:03 PM AEST
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Pixie this is very sad im lost for words you really put your heart out on this poem. Its very beautiful the way you put you expressed your heart on this write.
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Jane |
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Re: Will You Dance On My Grave?
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by Mangs on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:34:58 PM AEST
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| Deep...really dark and deep....no words can do justice to the feeling... |
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:58:49 PM AEST
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| I wish ravens really sang. We have them by the hundreds..they're very intelligent..but they make the most irritating sound..a clicking in their craw. Your poem is so beautiful it deserves a beautiful song..but I know why you used the symbolic raven.. great write pix. I'm going to read the teddy bear one now.. |
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Re: Will You Dance On My Grave?
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by BlindSuicide on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:10:23 PM AEST
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Pixie this is my second time on this site.. i used to be TheBlackVoid and i read a lot of your poems. Your a great writer you express yourself well and your a very sweet girl.You take everybody's feelings into considerration..even though thats what this site is about lol.. but thats besides the point. I admire you keep up your great work.
Your's truely
~Alucia~ |
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Re: Will You Dance On My Grave?
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:16:39 PM AEST
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| Pixie, this is such a dark write. I hope eveything is ok. Great write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Will You Dance On My Grave?
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by LEMMEN on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:24:06 PM AEST
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Very powerfull write. Filled with great sarrow and pain. Depression the curse of mankind most great poets have it's written in their words of rime. May you find that inner peace that inner strengh to keep you from this eternal sleep.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Will You Dance On My Grave?
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:44:48 PM AEST
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Uh pixie sweetie this poem makes me wanna cry.
It's so sad . hugs |
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Re: Will You Dance On My Grave?
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:48:52 PM AEST
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| one can only hope it will leave us be....explosive write my friend...... |
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Re: Will You Dance On My Grave?
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by venkat on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 12:54:48 AM AEST
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Aww..awww..awww..I am speachless..you have to come out of your grave to hug me like an angel..lol..silly girl..many many hugs:-) venkat
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Re: Will You Dance On My Grave?
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by Dstar on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:08:28 PM AEST
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| Wow i really love this poem it's awesome and very deep. I could tell you've stated your true feelings in this. I love it, look forward to more of your work!!! |
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by sunshiny on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:31:38 PM AEST
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| Really deep and full of sorrow. My heart goes out to you as I read this. I look forward to reading your other work. Thanks! |
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