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Lost
Contributed by
Mangs
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:38:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Menacing in its passive manner.
I wander aimlessly,
yet am full of purpose.
The landscape is boundless,
Yet I can barely see the next step I am about to take.
Occasionally I come across something familiar,
A rock or a tree,
Sometimes a face,
But always it is swallowed by the mist
A pale ball of white hot flame burns
With the blinding light of realisation,
But is veiled by thick dark clouds of dependence.
I wander aimlessly
Yet am full of purpose.
Lost in the past,
Blind to the present,
Looking for the future.
Copyright ©
Mangs
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2004-11-17 11:38:39]
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Re: Lost
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:50:53 AM AEST
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woah deepness.
I can relate to this, as i feel i am at a cross roads in my life.
Im very unsure which direction i should take,
this is a very good write.
take care
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Re: Lost
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by shattered_heart on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:31:27 PM AEST
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Wow, this is just the poem I needed to read right now. I know exactly how you feel and it's torture isnt it...When your world moves so much that you never seem to get things right in your life. I love this poem, I hope you write more in the future like this. Good write.
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