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Train Journey
Contributed by
sean88
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:33:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Travelling steady yet unsure
From night till day,
I always wonder
How long it’ll stay
Arrives in bursts
Then leaves unforeseen,
This shouldn’t happen
It tears self esteem
And for when it’s gone
It won’t return,
You’ve done this to me
Without any concern
So now with a broken heart
I’ve to trudge on through,
When the picture before me,
Is o so blue
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sean88
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2004-11-17 11:33:11]
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Re: Train Journey
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:40:57 AM AEST
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good write, i hope that your broken heart will mend one day soon *hugs*
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Train Journey
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by LEMMEN on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:41:56 PM AEST
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A broken heart is never really healed. Just contiune to write and I believe someone new will fill that spot that is so blue.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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