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Tangible
Contributed by
Saitou-sama
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:22:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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It's spreading slowly across the tile
And you thought you'd only stay a while
It's too late; now you're my own
Pinnacle of beauty thrown
You're far too wondrous to let go
And I just can't put you down below
Your screaming frozen in its place
As crimson red plays on your face
Your spindly curves are tantalizing
And eyes once bright with pure despising
Are glazing, now the red is gone
Sweetened bliss cut short from long
I didn't appreciate your pompous lying
You said you weren't afraid of dying
So tell me, dear, why did you scream
Before I ripped you from this dream?
My finger stroke your paling lips
With my knees straddling your fragile hips
Leaning over your lifless frame
I softly whisper your sweet name
A concept that I had not considered
A taste of life that once was bittered
By your shouts of mad protests
That now are gone for state of rest
Succulent nectar on my lips
Licking it from my fingertips
A morbid feel of arousal led
By cascading form of elegance bled
Strip away remaining cloth
Remove the last modesty dross
Succumb to carnal bodily desire
A lifeless form now racked with fire
Copyright ©
Saitou-sama
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2004-11-17 11:22:10]
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Re: Tangible
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:23:00 AM AEST
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that was quite a beautiful psychotic poem,
great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Tangible
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by EternalNight4x on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:30:42 PM AEST
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| wow interesting poem, well written |
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Re: Tangible
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 01:50:35 PM AEST
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that was such a great poem....i absolutely loved it.....it was so beautiful in its own way....great job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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