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Adam
Contributed by
Saitou-sama
on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:14:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I can't stomach your memory
Can't bleed, cause of you
Can't sleep cause you're irritating
Pile of bilge who smothers me through
Squirt of agitation
Running down my throat
Swallow you down painfully
Cringe for some sweet antidote
Can't stand the sight of you
And I don't do anything
To trample this down
And the sleeping deep-set stinging
For my pain
You cause my desecration
A night of self-infliction
Climatic burst of rampage
And you're driving me insane
Copyright ©
Saitou-sama
... [
2004-11-17 11:14:03]
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Re: Adam
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by LEMMEN on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:46:36 PM AEST
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Very rythmic. Well written I must say. May this this just fade away.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Adam
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by Sweetheart on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 06:57:09 PM AEST
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| Hey, I read this and thought it to be kinda weird because someone named adam is trying to destroy my life right now. I must say that I have expierenced similar anger. Just pray about it and hopefully things will get better. |
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