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Delayed
Contributed by
sean88
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:59:20 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Staring through the window
Of uncertainty and pain,
The pictures getting clearer
Looking through the rain
But there are just too many problems
And that’s why we cannot be,
I understand your reasons
Although it’s still hurting me
If only there was something
Just one thing I could do for you,
Would be to make the pain go away
And make your dreams come true
So hopefully some time soon
Your problems will just fade,
Then we can be together
As for now, it’s just delayed
Copyright ©
sean88
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2004-11-17 10:59:20]
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Re: Delayed
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:02:41 AM AEST
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very good write, well written and expressed,
pixie xx |
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Re: Delayed
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:13:02 PM AEST
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| If i had a penny for everytime I've felt that way..id b rich. One thing i've learned though was that it'll always get better and things seem to work themselves out. On that note, it was a crazy read I really liked it and you expressed yourself a lot. |
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Re: Delayed
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 08:30:57 PM AEST
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| This was nicely hopeful. Keep writing. Cheers! |
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