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Untitled2
Contributed by
HumGirl18
on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 04:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Going from one direction to another
Then to an everlasting point
The weapons shot and it all falls
Light turns to dark as the dealer smokes this joint
For him everything is calm and cool
The story's not the same for you
Inside you're tied up tight
Your face turns from pink to blue
You're suffocated by supposed love
As you struggle he tightens his grip
Your heart pounds and your chest aches
Ask for help and he will flip
You back away from the burning flame
Not quick enough your skin is burnt
Now you too are black through and through
What lesson have you learnt
Love and you will get hurt
Safety only comes from hate
Build a wall and live alone
Unless its already much too late
Copyright ©
HumGirl18
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2002-11-21 04:45:00]
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Re: Untitled2
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by Sarah22 on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 12:16:27 AM AEST
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keep writing
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Re: Untitled2
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 08:47:16 PM AEST
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I liked the last stanza, well thought out.
Later. |
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