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Memories to Save
Contributed by
mysticpoet
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:36:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Feelings of wonder fill my mind
As we enter the darkness,
Leaving the light behind.
Cool and Moist,
The air gives a chill,
Everything here is dark and still.
Wonderous formations
Form like a wall, etching
Tunnels and shadows
Resembling long halls.
A dark, bottomless lake
Cut out of the earth,
Reminds me of this
Great Planet's birth.
Formations of rock
Millions of years old,
Made of droplets of water
That feel really cold.
As you leave the darkness,
Feeling tired and beat,
The sun is shining brightly
You can feel the heat.
You'd like to return to
The cool dark cave,
Where time stops.
Memories to save.
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2004-11-17 09:36:00]
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Re: Memories to Save
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by alexb on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:47:14 AM AEST
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| sounds like a wonderful, secluded place that would be nice to see |
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Re: Memories to Save
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:47:38 AM AEST
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I'd like to think that when our time comes it is the images of memories we've saved in our minds, memories like this poem of yours.
I have been to several place similiar to your description but I could never find the words that could eclipse that feeling and the sight that overwhelms you deep inside.
A magnificient poem.
Kie |
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Re: Memories to Save
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:50:25 AM AEST
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a lovely poem, sounds like a memory that is so worth saving :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Memories to Save
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 04:28:13 PM AEST
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I have a strange fascination for Tennessee and this makes it even more fascinating....
Great imagery..good write
Jenni |
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