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Desires Of A Killer
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:10:03 AM in AEST
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Desires of a killer would chill your blood,
To your body they want to do harm not good,
They dream about cutting & slitting your skin,
Exposing your flesh & bones from deep within.
Their thoughts are filled with rotting flesh,
Of your pretty face they long to make a mess,
Rip out your heart; take its last beat,
Their evil desires will never take a back seat.
They spend their days laying in wait,
Waiting so that murder can seal your fate,
They show no mercy as you beg for your life,
They laugh out loud as they plunge in the knife.
You can’t spot a killer by their facial features,
They are like chameleons, such devious creatures,
To talk to they are just like you & me,
They don’t leave tell tale signs for you to see.
To take a peek inside a killers mind,
Would make you wish you had long ago gone blind,
They feel adrenalin when they seek out a new kill,
To see someone dying gives them such a thrill.
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pixie
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Re: Desires Of A Killer
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:45:48 AM AEST
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Ok, you've given me chills. This is excellent---especially the part about killers not being recognizable. Reminds me of what I've learned of satan. If he truly appeared ugly, he'd be easy to avoid, but he always look so inviting and sucks us in before changing to his own shape for the kill.
Good write.
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Re: Desires Of A Killer
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:55:00 AM AEST
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Very graphic, but certainly does a good job of depicting evil in the world.
Good job, and a good write
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Re: Desires Of A Killer
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:36:01 AM AEST
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| very amazing write i liked it alot. |
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Re: Desires Of A Killer
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:55:05 AM AEST
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*looks over shoulder*
Ahhh! lol.
Nah, seriousy though, I don't know why movies don't scare me, when some poems give me major chills. lol.
*grins*
I like this hunni.
*huggies*
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Re: Desires Of A Killer
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:39:29 AM AEST
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wow, that one was so good!
I loved that write.
GREAT JOB!
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Desires Of A Killer
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:59:25 PM AEST
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| reminds me of an evil that touched her one day........one word.......chilling.... |
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Re: Desires Of A Killer
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by EternalNight4x on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:33:44 PM AEST
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| wow very well written and powerful write....keep posting |
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