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Why can't I do it?
Contributed by
givingin
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 08:49:46 AM in AEST
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I don’t wish I were dead,
or say that I’m sad,
I just wish to be happy,
just hope to be glad.
I know I may say it,
but I’m not strong enough,
When I try to release me,
I ‘m just not that tough.
I wish I could stop,
be happy once more,
but since I was 8,
my life has no core.
No center, no peace,
no place to retreat,
no one to care,
just a dummy to beat.
My emotions run high,
as I think of my past,
thinking this day,
it may be my last.
But what of the people,
I love so dear,
if I die now,
what will they fear.
Now that I’m dead,
will they kill themselves to,
that’s not what I want,
so what do I do?
Standing alone,
I stand here and cry,
I know that I can’t,
and won’t say goodbye.
The people I love,
I will never leave,
still I hope someday,
love I’ll receive.
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givingin
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2004-11-17 08:49:46]
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Re: Why can't I do it?
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by Deathly_Rose on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 08:52:35 AM AEST
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Aww hunny, I still love you, and I dont know what I'd do if you left. You are my best friend, and will be no matter what you do or say. (read my poem forever friends)
*~Alicia~* |
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Re: Why can't I do it?
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by blondie_64865 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 08:59:25 AM AEST
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| your poem is a very good read but at the same pace you can all so feel what your heart is saying. Just always remember God brought you to what ever trial and tribulation you are having in your life right now and he will bring you through it. May love find you soon and you get all the happiness you deserve. |
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Re: Why can't I do it?
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:11:56 AM AEST
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give yourself abit of time, you will be able to do it, this is an emotional write,
takecare,pixie xx |
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Re: Why can't I do it?
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:25:57 AM AEST
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I've had these thoughts. Even as a Christian, there are times I just want to go and be with God. It's hard to admit that is a selfish thing, but thinking of your family is a very unselfish thing. Keep writing. I enjoy reading your work.
Stitch |
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Re: Why can't I do it?
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by LEMMEN on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:48:44 AM AEST
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So much feeling so much love. I'm sure one day your star will fall from above. Don't give up the fight keep on with the things that matter most in your life. Your words send a message. To many and all your no longer alone you have us all.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Why can't I do it?
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by EternalNight4x on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:39:01 PM AEST
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| veyr powerful write...sometimes i feel like that too...actually most of the time...well keep posting |
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Re: Why can't I do it?
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:34:53 PM AEST
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Twisting In the wind can leave ya confused
and the emotional torture will leave you
drained,but hang in you KNOW we love you.
The Wind........ |
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Re: Why can't I do it?
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by Scarlett on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:27:47 AM AEST
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simple words but extremely effective. i have felt like this and i didn't act upon it for the same reasons as you. it's hard now but in the future you will look back and be thankful for the weight of other people's love.
lovely poem, could feel your emotions.
keep posting, this was a pleasure to read x |
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