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Since You've Been Gone
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:53:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Since You’ve Been Gone
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Last night around midnight
I turned off the light
For my eyes were full of red
Instead of white
Another day had ended
But my pain still lived on
It’s been this way for years
Since you’ve been gone
I tossed and turned
Hadn’t gotten a second of rest
Tried to think of something different
I tired my best
But memories of you
Dominated my mind
I relived every second
Of every good time
It’s as if you are here with me
Laying in bed
Sharing the thoughts
That race inside my head
When the sun comes up in the morning
I’ll still be here
Basking in the memories
And drenched in my tears
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Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2004-11-17 07:53:20]
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Re: Since You've Been Gone
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:59:37 AM AEST
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This is absolutely brilliant, its so beautifully composed and written. I love the last stanza its fits perfectly.
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Re: Since You've Been Gone
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by alexb on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:51:31 AM AEST
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| i wish i could write more like this |
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Re: Since You've Been Gone
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:40:08 AM AEST
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How very sad but beautifully versed. Very nice write. It is hard when we miss & are without the ones we love. But on a positive note at least they have given us memories that nobody can take away & they will always live on inside us.
Very dear poem,
Thanks for sharing.
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