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STABBED!
Contributed by
givingin
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:33:53 AM in AEST
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Stabbed again,
it hurts so much,
the wound is deep,
I cannot touch,
My soul is hurt,
my emotions torn,
weren’t you my friend,
I could have sworn.
My back has been stabbed,
again and again,
my heart has been ripped,
right out from my hand.
I thought we were friends,
I thought I nice,
yet my back has been stabbed,
not once, but twice.
I guess now it’s over,
we’re no longer friends,
this is the last time,
I make amens.
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2004-11-17 07:33:53]
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Re: STABBED!
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by mysticpoet on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:47:11 AM AEST
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| Good Poem, we all have had people we thought were friends, only to have them say one thing to you and another to someone else. That is no one's friend! |
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Re: STABBED!
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:47:27 AM AEST
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this poem was filled with your pain, you made the readers feel what you do, very good write, well expressed poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: STABBED!
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:44:53 PM AEST
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i feel this way right now with one of my best friends who is now dating the guy who ive loved for 9 months now and who i still love very much.....she stabbed me in the back and ripped out my heart....but for some reason i cant talk to her aoubt it and tell her how upset it makes me...i wish i coul b ethat strong......anyways after hearing my long story....lol this is a great write....very touching to me.....i loved it....it brought tears to my eyes....awesome job
Lots of Love
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Re: STABBED!
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 11:53:58 AM AEST
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This was a really good poem. I can relate. I liked the way that this was written and you expressed yourself brillantly. Great poem.
take care
christina |
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