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SSDD
Contributed by
ExodusOnWeezer
on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:31:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Meet me on the other side
From which I toppled from
Decide where we shall topple next
Fix ourselves in where I become
Magic feelings in my air
Float right through my eyes
Blue unto blue, you tainted me
Painted with nothing but lies
Smile on, from the completely different side
The only way I shall ever come back
Stuck inside a loneliness with the comfort of you
Racked upon emptiness, stuck on a rack
You won't stand next to loneliness
Even as I yell and scream in despair
It's like you're oblivious to emptiness
And it's like you don't see me yelling there
But, feel as I do
And always seem as it will
Right up off the street tonight
Right on up and I love you still
Copyright ©
ExodusOnWeezer
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2004-11-17 01:31:46]
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Re: SSDD
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by namesaretaken on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:49:20 AM AEST
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Good stuff I really like the line
Blue unto blue, you tainted me
It really stuck out for me
Feelings often change with time I hope
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Re: SSDD
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:03:49 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love it!!! |
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