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pop goes the poem
Contributed by
timmy2scoops
on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:19:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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pop goes the weasle
pop goes the corn
pop goes the ballon
i see devil horns
dark and wet
in a stolen vet
drivein real crazy
went into the store
the booze made me hazzy
ate the weasle
feelin lazy
i miss my ballon
my lips are achy
i need my corn
left the vet
i seen the devil
i bluffed his bet
now i wear the horns
and use them for good
i scared a few people so i wore a hood
pop off 2 work
pop off 2 bed
its friday
pop goes my check
what the heck???
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2004-11-17 01:19:21] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: pop goes the poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by namesaretaken on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:51:54 AM AEST (User
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This poem really expresses the randomness of thought but it kind of came together
I really liked the last few lines
pop off 2 work
pop off 2 bed
its friday
pop goes my check
what the heck???
I know that feeling all to well
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Re: pop goes the poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by mysticpoet on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:56:17 AM AEST (User
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I think your poem is cool, made me laugh.
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