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How selfish of me
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:31:39 AM in AEST
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how dare i dream?
how selfish of me
how dare i dream?
Of a reason not to cry
Of a death i will never die
of a free spirt in the sky
how dare i dream?
Of a home away from pain
Of a desire that all be treated the same
Of a faithful lover i can claim
how dare i dream?
how dare i dream......
inspired by "i dared to dream" by MoonliteRain copyright 1993
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2004-11-17 00:31:39]
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Re: How selfish of me
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by namesaretaken on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:57:45 AM AEST
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I thought it was a very good write
I also like the fact that anothers work inspired you.
My fav lines where
Of a home away from pain
Of a desire that all be treated the same
Many dream of this good stuff |
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Re: How selfish of me
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:24:33 AM AEST
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I think its good, SM - although this really belongs in the sarcastic poetry section, as its positively dripping in its own lament.
Keep writing and being inspired. |
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