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Blackened Tears
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 10:31:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My blackened tears stain my face
They’re falling at a constant pace
I’ve held them in for way to long
I’m just so tired of being “strong”
It’s time you saw the pain inside
So I no longer have to hide
Sympathy is not what I’m looking for
I just don’t want to hold it in anymore
But this is only in a dream
As my tears begin stream
No one’s here to see them fall
No one hears my silent call
You’ll never see the pain I feel
I’ve locked it inside with a seal
I will not give you that satisfaction
To see the pain you cause in action
Only alone will I cry
Anywhere else I think I’d die
I wish I could make you feel my pain
And yet towards you I feel no disdain
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CrimsonTears
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2004-11-16 22:31:18]
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Re: Blackened Tears
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 10:57:11 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem.you kept me interested. you made me feel your pain and wonder why the tears that flow like rain... take care.. im here if you want to talk....sandy |
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Re: Blackened Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:03:50 AM AEST
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Beautifully heart-wrenching. I think this is brilliant, captivating and inspirational from the first word to the last.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Blackened Tears
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:57:07 AM AEST
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This is one excellent poem, you have composed this so well. it really it a wonderful poem.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Blackened Tears
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:19:05 AM AEST
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wow this was so sad, yet beautiful at the same time, an excellent poem,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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