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Waking You With A Kiss
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
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I see you there deeply sleeping and I fall for you again
I listen in to hear you breathing and feel complete
But I hear nothing maybe I am too far away
Your faded red hair falls over and reveals your face
I can see that you cried yourself to sleep again
Your black mascara still in the path where your tears rained down
Cascading over your beautiful face and rosy cheeks and pale skin
Like sherry blossom leaves over the snow with a sunset taking place
I put my face to yours with the intention of waking you with a kiss
My lips meet yours in a sweet unity but I can not feel your breathe
I look at your wrist and see no new scars and feel them for a pulse
And I feel nothing at all and start to panic so I rip your shirt open and
Put my face to your chest to see if I can hear it beating but cannot
I look over your bed to that counter and see your pills on it
And I knew what I have to do I pick you up into my arms
I carry you to the floor and try to get your heart beating hoping it is not too late
I breathe into your mouth my whole life and finally start to feel you breath again
But you still do not awaken so I pick you up onto my arms again and
Take you into the bath and turn on the cold water letting it fall on us both
I am so lucky that I was on time but still too late to keep you safe
Your eyes open and look at me then you pass our again
I turn the water off and dry us off a bit just to get you into my car
Once in my car I drive off to the hospital going eighty on the free way
A cop pulls me over and I tell him that you overdosed but are still alive
He asks me on what and I tell him I am not sure but I think you where snorting percaset
He lets me go and escorts me to the hospital and we both start to speed again
We rush in and there are doctors waiting for us already in place
They strap you to a bed and put needles into your arms
And they rush you away from me to where I cannot follow
An hour later a doctor come and tells me where your room is
So I go there and you are still asleep but the nurse there tells me you are stable
And that I got you there in time before it got severe
I sit by you in bed holding you hand and keeping you warm
And start to think how you could do this to me
But then remember that I never told you how I really felt
I guess it is in part my fault
Maybe it is my entire fault it almost always is
A few hours pass and
You open your eyes and look at me
And asked me what happened
I tell you that you took my chance away
To wake you with a kiss but that you are safe
And that I never left your side
You start to remember that you where snorting percaset
And tell me that I saved you and call me your Angel
And fall asleep again
I guess I will get my chance after all
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2004-11-16 22:25:00]
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Re: Waking You With A Kiss
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 11:02:52 PM AEST
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As the tears flow down my cheek, wow...
Caught me up with the romance at the beginning. and the on edge because of the pain and worry. and then a relief that everything will be ok.. and the most romantic verse is that you desire to have that chance again.... thought that your too good for this lady... dont mean to sound mean but... you have gone through alot...sandy |
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Re: Waking You With A Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:07:03 AM AEST
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Awwww so beautifully romantic! Very well written, thanks for sharing.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Waking You With A Kiss
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:49:04 AM AEST
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Wow that is beyond the best dramatic love stroy i have read today, i really love this one *thumbs up*
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Waking You With A Kiss
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:19:53 AM AEST
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awwww this is very, very beautiful, wonderful poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Waking You With A Kiss
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by WildfireRose on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 01:03:36 AM AEST
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| I was crying to, loving someone that much is so beautiful...good write |
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Re: Waking You With A Kiss
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 03:26:26 PM AEST
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So incredibly romantic....
Even with the whole sadness inbetween...
It is just so wonderful |
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