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Break Down
Contributed by
humboldtsweetie33
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 10:07:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Consumed by it, haunted by it and scared by it.
This pain reliever I thought of has drawn me in
I am officially addicted now,
I am an addict.
Talked about only in reference of being insane
the one thing everyone fears
is now my only way of life
people don't understand the wanting or needing I have for it
It's almost like I have no life now
I am a prisoner to cutting
this addiction will not stop and I fear it
I have givin in to its calling
there is no cure I have found out the hard way
I am all alone in this
On my own
But there is one thing
one way of escaping all of this madness
I don't see how I could have missed this before
It's so simple
I have finally figured out why this way of life has chosen me
to help me
to instantly take my pain away to a place where only the two of us, my blade and I exist
the result of him may not be pretty,
but it's the only way I have of expressing my feelings
the only way to let it all out
no one suspects the quiet ones like me
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Re: Break Down
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 11:10:10 PM AEST
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| Have you noticed that everyone who thinks the way you do end up cutting. someone starts to do it and says try it.. like a drug you know. or a habit. so hard to break. Jesus not only died on the cross for our sins.. by his stripes we are healed. Maybe a outlet you havent tried yet. funny I have this feeling that I need talk hard to you instead of softness. you better watch it my friend your getting to dang close to a end. reach out to him and let him take your hand. let him wipe away those tears let him love you like he can let him show you a new way and a new beginning.. there is nothing he cant do.. all things are possible through him.... take care... sandy by the way.. love the way you wrote the poem.. you have agift. |
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Re: Break Down
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by humboldthunny17 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 01:56:42 PM AEST
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| Maddy u know I'm trying to help u-- THERE are other ways of expressing your feelings besides cutting-- LUV YA TONS!! |
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