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Anguish

Contributed by Jacque_C on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:21:25 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Anguish
Hey what's your name
Never seen you before
I heard people talking
And they called you a whore
So I figured I'd ask
Is all this ***** true
I look in your eyes
Know you (dont think that they do)
Look I appreciate your upfront
But I don't wanna talk
If you believe all that *****
I suggest that you walk
I wouldn have came if I did
Please give me a chance
Plus i know about Cergo
This isn just a first glance
Well if you know me so good
Then whats there to tell
Im so tired of explaining
Got nieve and i fell
Trusted trancslucent people
Caught up seeing optimism
So since you obviously chilled with him
I really don't need your critisicm
Okay, I'm here to be your friend
Swear I'm not like the rest
I wanna know what makes you tick
Put your heart back in your chest
Oh, thats really nice
But why believe you?
Your probably a lair
And pride on it too!
Well you did come and ask
Instead of judge just so quick
So ill give you some time
Though I know it's a risk
Don't start if you can't finish
My minds not a toy
Don't play my emotions
Don't let my pain bring you joy
I'll LOVE you forver
Well that's a really strong word
I'll take care of you always
Baby I believe that you would
So why did you wait
To tell me the truth
Till my heart was caught up
And its pieces renewed
You promised to cherish
Said my soul was a gift
Seems more like a trophy
Bringing fame when it lifts
I said i hate games
Not to play one with me
This was the last one I'll trust
If thats what it takes just to see
So now so far down the road
I look at your face
In yours eyes all Love dead
Repulsive lies keep them glazed
Till this day you still promise
You never toyed with my spirit
If thats the truth ...
when you decive(Hope YOU get played and you hear it

Copyright © Jacque_C ... [ 2004-11-16 20:21:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Anguish (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:11:30 PM AEST
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i love the premise of the conversation.....that rocks....very unique....and in some places in the piece it works awesomely well together.....while others it's kind of a struggle.....i know of that struggle......no worries......you did real well here.......

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