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Trooper
Contributed by
Suz
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:12:51 PM in AEST
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Trooper, lower your bayonnet,
Guerilla like it's the Everglades,
Nestle with your Sixth Brigade.
Savor the horsefly's sweet sonnet,
This ventricle of woodland
Is just an overgrown domain.
Copyright ©
Suz
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2004-11-16 20:12:51]
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Re: Trooper
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:14:56 PM AEST
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| short but powerful, great poem* |
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Re: Trooper
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by SWCSuzyQ on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:21:15 PM AEST
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| Keep working on this one has a lot of potential |
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Re: Trooper
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:26:56 PM AEST
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lol. Am thinking that most of the people reading this are totally not going to understand it but'll pretend they do. But then, I don't think I completely understand it, either . . . yeah, boo me. But I just want to keep reading it over and over until I understand every last pixel. Especially the phrase "the horsefly's sweet sonnet" . . . omg I love that. Anyhow, beautiful job as usual, Zanna.
love,
meeee |
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