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The Poem Of Sorrow Pt. 3 : I'm Sorry God

Contributed by thepos on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:39:01 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

The Poem Of Sorrow Pt. 3 : I'm Sorry God

I'm sorry what I said to you,
Oh, mister god all mighty.
I'm sorry you made my life ****ed,
And I'm sorry I'm never tightly.
**** you god.
I hate everything you've done!
I've killed my whole family and friends,
With this ****ing gun.
You toy with us people,
You make us turn insane.
You kill us with tornadoes.
You massacre with hurricanes.
You kill us people with earthquakes.
and lightning just attacks.
Why don't you kill criminals,
or send tornadoes in Iraq?
What the **** were you thinking?
When you gave us the feeling of hate?
How many of "your creations"
died because war was their fate?
Why do people pray to you?
To ask you for a hand!
Not to ignore them, you *** hole!
Why do you treat us this way? This I want to understand.
So I'll just finish up your work,
And destroy everything you've made!
You don't have a problem with that, right?
Because to me you've only betrayed!
I don't believe in heaven,
why would you make something so nice?
Stop ****ing with our lives,
here is a little advice.
Don't create things so they can feel pain and suffer,
Don't create life to die.
Don't even think that there is fun,
When you make people cry.
**** you, **** the world,
**** even my own life.
Why do you think I release my anger,
Cutting my wrists with this knife?
I'm your worst ****ing nightmare,
That is hate in your head!
Your lucky your not one of us,
If you were, you'd be dead.
I can't stop this hate,
All I'm filled with is rage!
I won't be stopped at all,
Nobody will even try to engage!
I can't explain my hate,
That is directly only on you.
I hate you more than pain,
Your forgiveness to me is taboo!
You know what? Just **** it.
I can't take this any more!
I'll just shoot my self,
if you'll continue to ignore.
Bye.

--Evan L.

more on: www.thepoemsofsorrow.com

Copyright © thepos ... [ 2004-11-16 17:39:01]
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Re: The Poem Of Sorrow Pt. 3 : I'm Sorry God (User Rating: 1 )
by Hollie85 on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:27:19 PM AEST
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Whoa! I do not believe in god or religion so I am not offended by this poem but there is so much anger and hatred toward God. Did you used to believe? It that why you are so angry in god? A great peice of poetry - i just hope thats all it is.

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