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go yo hell
Contributed by
lacymaeflower
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:21:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Why Did you bother?
Why did you try?
How could you do it?
Tell me that lie?
You knew it would hurt
and you hoped it would
I almost killed you
Now I wish I could
What else should I do?
What else but me sorry
for what I have done
Now it's time to move on and have some fun
I haven't changed
I haven't fell
there is one thing I wish
For you to go to HELL! "
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2004-11-16 17:21:28]
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Re: go yo hell
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by Unheard_Mute on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:29:51 PM AEST
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| A change from your first three, a welcomed one. All your talk of death and suicide was unnerving. Glad it's just you getting out emotions... |
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Re: go yo hell
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by witch_derna on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:16:19 PM AEST
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I like it lol. Good rhyming.
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Re: go yo hell
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by amatt on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:47:15 PM AEST
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very cool is all i got to say.....later...
~this world sucks~ |
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