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Freestyle #1
Contributed by
BigMike
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Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
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On the streets they call me jeusus believe it cuz' when you hear this or see it you're gonna be depleated, deprived of energy neccasary to survive and i write with benevolence ever since I first started spiting without quiting for any one without any one around to walk my ground I can make buildings come down I deep like Lake Placid and I only write classics I write some real nice ryhmes not only did I forget to spit some more, but the bell just chimed
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Re: Freestyle #1
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by OreO on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:54:27 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful, this
should be in the form of lyrics!!
You write good when your bored lol
Thanks for sharing t his one i
really enjoyed it. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Freestyle #1
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by chatabox on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 08:35:25 PM AEST
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I can see this as a rap......
looks like getting bored sparks creativity in you. |
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Re: Freestyle #1
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by staryeyed on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 11:49:20 AM AEST
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| ive been looking for someone with freestyle ryhymes on this site, i have some but i dont like to post them, let me know if you want me to share them with you privately. |
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