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it could be anyone
Contributed by
summers
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:15:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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there’s nothing as elusive as a true love story
i carved your name in a park bench
i carved your name in my arm
with a rusty knife
the same i used to spill your blood
before i hung you on my mantle
you said ‘give me something beautiful’
is this what you had in mind?
insert your name in the chorus
i did it all for you
Copyright ©
summers
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2004-11-16 17:15:59]
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Re: it could be anyone
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by neglected1 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:51:59 PM AEST
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this speaks loudly to me.. its simple in short but.. it really sticks out there..
i really enjoyed reading this
In my mind you did a wonderful job, keep it up
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Re: it could be anyone
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by Always on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:36:41 PM AEST
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| Crappy, crappy feelings eh man......good out though. |
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Re: it could be anyone
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 01:28:45 PM AEST
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wow that was very sad...kinda pshycotic but very nice at the same time...brings out the true obssesions of the ones we love....
please comment on my work too
summer |
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