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The Day I Left Amber
Contributed by
crash
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 04:41:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I still remember our first kiss
On that night we were so emotional
It took me so long to work up the courage
I hoped I hadn't made a mistake
I took off, not long after that night
The day I left I lost my light
I didn't want to be hurt so I left the fight
Not realizing my heart was at stake
It seemed forever that I ran
But it wasn't long before I came back
I nearly died just to see you again
Not long after I said "I love you"
To say it without a lie
Girl that scared me to death
In the moments that followed
I took no breath
Til I heard "love you too"
The weeks that followed
were the best I've had
Life with you
just mad me glad
Before a month was over,
I got courage again
I took you in the back
and then I took a knee
the look in your eyes
mistified me
I made a short speech
and then I got to the point
Once again time stood still
and I drew no breath
I almost died
when you said yes
We went for another week or two
then it was you who needed a break
I felt as though I had already lost
So with my stuff
out the door, our love I tossed
I've thought of you
every day I can remember
Life just isn't the same
since I left Amber
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crash
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2004-11-16 16:41:49]
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Re: The Day I Left Amber
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by BlindSuicide on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 04:46:13 PM AEST
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Awwww. That is so sweet and yet sad. I heard a long time ago if love is emant to be it will, if not you will have many heartaches but a new person will temporairly fill that space. Good luck.
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Re: The Day I Left Amber
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by BlindSuicide on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 04:46:59 PM AEST
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| Grrr lol typos. *Meant |
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Re: The Day I Left Amber
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by Chaos_is_apon_us on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 12:35:39 AM AEST
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Oddly formatted, but you still convey your thought well. I have been there myself, eternaly pursuing the one who holds your heart
Better dayz
~jace~ |
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