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Greenville Diner
Contributed by
recompile
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 04:34:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I sit at a quiet
Downtown diner alone
I'm here all the time
It brings me peace
I wave to people whose
Names I'll never know
They are like me here
For the same reasons
We are a community
Each individual
Sharing a place
Living together
I flirt, cute waitress
When it's nice outside
I'll walk her home
Sometimes, tonight
At home, I look
At her number
I never call
Part-time friends
Old girlfriends
And cool wine
Never spirits
Still reclusive
I'll sleep, maybe
Later today
It's late or early
Seems hard to tell
Sundays I wait
Worry about things
To come weekly
Long working days
I'll come back home
Coffee and waitress
My never friends
At my diner alone
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Re: Greenville Diner
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:12:31 AM AEST
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I can picture this quiet evening with the shadows beginning to surround the lights of the diner. Thanks for sharing that picture. There's just something about diners.
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Re: Greenville Diner
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by Sinned on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 03:51:23 AM AEST
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I see the picture very well.If your single ask the waitress out.Are you shy ? You will never break it unless you try.Interesting poem.
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Re: Greenville Diner
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by frozensuicide on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 01:52:41 PM AEST
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| sounds easy going. very creative |
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Re: Greenville Diner
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by freckle on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 12:54:45 PM AEST
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| I love this poem. Good flow, great word choices. Just a great poem. It should be in a book. |
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