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The Crow's Flight
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 04:11:29 PM in AEST
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Black feathered one of days gone by
The ghost who walks my skin
Creeps so near,yet still so far
Haunts the emptiness within
Crow flies as does the word of truth
Lifted by the winds of deceit
Carried to the depths of one
Who has tears so incomplete
For memory serves this one so well
As I remember the promise of times
I was layed upon the alter of he
Who has shattered this heart of mine
Unworthy it seems to be held in truth
A nothing to be left,as though dead
The crow flies the wind on his own terms
No matter the hearts he has tread
Hungry children bestowed a gift upon him
Gave of their selves with trust
The goodness of souls,not knowing the risks
For to trust such a crow,what a cost
Take yes he did,took from their hands
Then flew on and into the night
Leaving behind more hungry mouths
Snuffing from them,trusts light
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Re: The Crow's Flight
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:59:46 PM AEST
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Interesting, but lovely write..
Good to see you visiting and posting..
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Re: The Crow's Flight
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:48:52 PM AEST
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| as the crow flies..straight..hmmm interesting. I thought guests couldn't leave anything behind..nice write. |
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Re: The Crow's Flight
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:31:07 AM AEST
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The crow behaved like a jacal..very interesting..nice to see you posting again..
best of luck..:-) venkat
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Re: The Crow's Flight
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:33:09 AM AEST
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Well written story . Hard to really know what's in anyones heart huh old friend? I am truly sorry if this is how things played out.
Roses :o(
Larry
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Re: The Crow's Flight
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 06:33:16 PM AEST
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I know you probably wont get this lol but thank you ...all of you for the words and your time
May peace be with all and the warm sun touch your souls
LW |
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Re: The Crow's Flight
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:51:53 AM AEST
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I haven't been here for ages, but have missed your poetry and beautiful, inspiring comments. I hope everything's going good for you. This was one absolutely beautiful poem.
*hugs*
Stacey |
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