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My Intro
Contributed by
lostangelaz
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 04:00:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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All my thoughts,
I write here.
Things that are
on my mind, dwell
in this little place.
Everyone can and
will see all
my pain and suffering.
All the happy times,
all the painful times.
Everyword I put here,
comes from my heart.
So, everyone around can
see and look into my soul.
Even though this one doesn't
make any sense at all.
Copyright ©
lostangelaz
... [
2004-11-16 16:00:32]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Intro
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 04:25:44 PM AEST
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Nice write. Words don't need to make sense. That's what makes poetry so great. Some rime. Some chime. Some just tell the story of life. Good job.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: My Intro
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:38:23 PM AEST
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| i've written pieces like this a lot too...classes can bore the heck outta u and i can sympathize. I can relate. good poem. |
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Re: My Intro
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 08:23:26 PM AEST
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| Sometimes mine don't make sense either. Usually when I want to say something I don't feel free in saying. Anyway, you've made a good start. Keep writing! |
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Re: My Intro
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by xMizeriex on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:24:18 AM AEST
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Makes perfect sense to me ^_^
Keep writing.
Bx |
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