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Nothing makes sense
Contributed by
BlindSuicide
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 03:55:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm losing my mind and my heart is breaking
The tears are flowing and the pain is aching
The wind blows but the trees stand still
I'm as well as i'll ever be but i feel so ill
The sun sets and rises but it remains dark
A dog opens its mouth but there is no bark
I can see but everything is a blurr
I can speak but every other word is a slurr
Nothing makes sense
You said it's over but i'm not convinced
As i look at old pictures i get the urge to cry, but no tears fall
I can't believe i lost you, i can't believe i lost it all
I lost seeing your lovely face
I lost sight of your smile, it vanished without a trace
I lost all memories of you
I forgot who you are, what am i going to do?
Still nothing makes sense
It's over i'm finally convinced
It hurts but it will pass by
It's over your gone, so i say goodbye
Nothing makes sense it's confusing me
You're gone i see it clearly
A dog barks i hear the sound
What's that? The trees are moving, i think i'm coming around
My vision is clear i think i'll be alright
The sun is rising, i finally see the light
Now it all makes sense
I don't need you anymore, are you convinced?
I've finally realized this relationship has reached its end
Goodbye my love, my friend
Copyright ©
BlindSuicide
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2004-11-16 15:55:34]
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Re: Nothing makes sense
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 04:31:17 PM AEST
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It's so hard to say good-bye to love espically when you dont want it to end. Good write.
Filled with so much sadness But life does move on to better and greater things.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Nothing makes sense
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by EternalNight4x on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:11:11 PM AEST
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| an excellent write...so much emotion and you expressed yourself very well..... |
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Re: Nothing makes sense
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:59:52 AM AEST
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See this is what i love to read it starts off bad but at the end it's all good... Everything is good you're over that person and moving on... Life goes on and nothing can make you stop from moving on... Great job!!!
Keep it up!!
~uNkNoWN BuTtErFLY~ |
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