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abortion
Contributed by
Rae
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 03:27:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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long shadows along Carriage House road,
children running on the streets.
a happy face,
and a sad stare.
a tree fell down right before their eyes,
it didn't make any sense.
is she crying?
he drove away after saying a short goodbye.
he does not know anything,
she kept telling herself.
the loud slap of a bass guitar
echoed through the 4th floor of the school building.
all the others panicked
while he and she spent an hour in the library.
she felt like a failure.
he felt so much doubt.
for a sad stare could have been a happy face,
and a short goodbye could have been a long embrace.
what ever happened to Love?
- Rae'04. 110804. Mon. 7:25 PM.
Copyright ©
Rae
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2004-11-16 15:27:13]
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Re: abortion
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 04:25:49 PM AEST
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This poem was very emotionally powerful...very good job on this one
Mason |
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Re: abortion
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by BlindSuicide on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 04:40:03 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem. Great write!
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