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Death In a Halo

Contributed by n0body on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:54:34 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I always said,

If they can dream, then why can’t I,
Can’t I wish not to die?

Can I get more?
More time to spend?
More of everything before the end?

Why doesn’t my wish, ever come true?
Why can’t I get even a clue.

I asked for something, and I asked quite nice,
But it doesn’t seem to matter, And I even asked twice.

Does no one hear me? That I want more?
Doesn’t god know what I’m screaming for?

What is this pain that stabs my heart?
Why can’t I throw it away and rip it apart?

Can’t tears of sorrow turn to joy?
Can’t I create instead of destroy?

I thought I lived in a perfect halo,
With gold thats found at the end of the rainbow,

When will I die, and let this be over?
I have no luck, no four leaf clover.

Can’t the end be any faster?
I hate this game of pet and master.

But then I realized something,
that I had not realized before.
Because I had been to busy asking for more.

But now I understand life really isn’t this bad,
I wish I could have noticed, sooner than I had,

I see that my thoughts were really misled,
Because all this time,
I’ve really been dead.

Copyright Â© n0body ... [ 2004-11-16 14:54:34]
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Re: Death In a Halo (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent_Storm on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 03:22:47 PM AEST
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interesting poem, san. Very thought provoking and once again I love how you rhyme!

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