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I guess it was never enough
Contributed by
Kitty_cat
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:14:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I remember the place
Where you first caught my eye
You were so sweet and funny
The laughter made me cry
You were shy and timid
And needed shaping up
I saw the potential in you
But I guess it wasnt enough
I remember the time
When i needed a friend
To help me with guy problems
And to help me to mend
You really were so kind
Helped me when times got tough
You told me what I really should do
But I guess it wasnt enough
I remember the time
When we meet once again
You were in town where I lived
Hanging with your girlfriend
Soon she had to go home
And it was just you and me
So we sat on a wall
And ate chips we got for free
Soon we started messing
Trying to stand on each others toes
It was like there was only you and me
And I forgot all of my lows
We got in a sticky position
And not kissing you was very tough
I thought you were gonna go in for a moment
But I guess it wasnt enough
I remember the time
When I did all you wished
So that you would like me
Just as much as I wished
Sometimes I'd get upset
You not loving me was tough
But still I'd carry on trying to please you
But I guess it wasn't enough
I remember the time
When I had to move away
And nothing could stop it
No matter how much I prayed
I had to leave you behind
The thought was really tough
I thought our friendship would last forever
But I guess it wasnt enough
I remember the time
When I was away from you
And I heard so many rumours
And hoped they werent true
I later confronted you
It didnt take you long to tell
That you really hated me
But I thought it was just a spell
I didn't know what reason
You would have of hating me
I thought it was best to leave you alone
To get over it for a while; to let you be
But your hatred got stronger
And times got tough
I tried making it up to you
But I guess it wasn't enough
Now you won't even talk to me
Not even a 'hello'
You won't answer the phone when I call you
You strive to hurt me so
I've tried sending you letters
Telling you how sorry I am
But you don't say anything back
The door for me you've slammed
I've tried coming to visit you
Even though moneys tight
But you flee away from the country
So theres no point in getting a flight
I still awfully love you
But I'd just like us to be friends
I wish i could go back to the old life
So that my heart mends
I've tried everything to make you like me again
This quest is proving tough
For always I'll keep trying to make it up to you
But it will never ever be enough
Copyright ©
Kitty_cat
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2004-11-16 14:14:43]
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Re: I guess it was never enough
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by recompile on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:12:24 PM AEST
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| This one seems to hit me close to home -- I've very recently found myself in a similar situation. You've revealed my sentiments quite eloquently! A fine read, I thank you. |
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Re: I guess it was never enough
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by blindcause on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 04:57:47 AM AEST
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Wow, this is really made me feel quite guilty especially about the rumors. Really good poem, I wish I could write like that. I'm sorry about your loss and I have no idea who you are, but I wish you all the best just the same. You are someone who deserves much better, but you also know what you want which makes it all the more difficult.
Best Wishes,
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Re: I guess it was never enough
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by wolfman on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 05:03:01 PM AEST
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| this was a fine writen poem it seems to have a lot of emotion in it, but dont despare ithere will be others and you never know he may turn around and relize that he wants your friendship also. |
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