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How can you want more? You've already taken everything i have

Contributed by surge_joebot on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:04:20 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm sick of this small minded nonsence, in a world where im the only one who sees how stupid you all really are.
Your pointless lives with your run around friendships,
There are so many people how can you know what all their names are?
I'm the only one that hears me crying at night because im the only one who's ever heard the sound of pain to recognise why the tears come.
Your lives know no bounds and your happy to just ride the roller coaster or tell people how much you like someone else, all the while the person your telling really likes you and then they know what its like on the other side of this night time ride.
When i've had a bad day no one takes my hand or holds me in their arms and says awww poor baby even though they dont mean it, cause secretly they have problem's of their own and it's that their lives are so damn perfect.
So now you know why I hate you... cause I cant be you, I tried and you didn't accept that I thought for myself and I did the next best thing and lived this life of jealousy right beside you - yet so far away from your standards.

Copyright © surge_joebot ... [ 2004-11-16 14:04:20]
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Re: How can you want more? You've already taken everything i have (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:19:28 PM AEST
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i liked this alot....i know this feeling i know pain and i know whats its liek to have no one hear you crying late at night in your room.....great poem....excellent work

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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