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A time long gone...
Contributed by
Mangs
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:12:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A Time Long Gone
For a brief moment, in a time long gone,
I believe you loved me, at least a little.
Never as much as I loved you, but enough.
Enough to make me happy.
And as much as you could.
I thought if I waited
That someday you would love me...
Love me as fully and completely
And joyously and recklessly as I loved you.
I waited for you to love me.
And I waited for you to love me.
And, then, I waited for you to love me.
I waited for you to find yourself.
I waited for you to search for your soul,
And fight your devils,
And find your anchors
And glean your answers.
And, finally, when you said
The puzzle pieces fit,
When you told me of your dreams,
And all the places you would go,
I waited for the earth to swallow me, whole.
In your excitement I guess you missed that
Not one dream, not one journey included me.
Copyright ©
Mangs
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2004-11-16 13:12:51]
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Re: A time long gone...
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:13:52 PM AEST
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awww this is moving and heartfelt *hugs*
pxie xx |
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Re: A time long gone...
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:36:51 PM AEST
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aww this is sad but alot of us on here have been through that before.. you could definately do better if their hopes and dreams didn't include you cuz when your in love they always should include you .. you should be their world and they should want to share and include you with everything .. apparently there is someone else out there for you There is always hope .. don't worry you will find the right one
Peace and hope
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Re: A time long gone...
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by travisk on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:03:21 PM AEST
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your concepts are strung together with very simple but very moving language.
bud, I know exactly what you mean |
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