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hemolysis
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summers
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:58:29 PM in AEST
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still young and not yet willing to accept her death
he got into his car and stepped on the gas
unaware of where he’d end up
ten minutes later, he was drowning in the ocean.
devotion is a framework for disaster.
Copyright ©
summers
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2004-11-16 12:58:29]
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Re: hemolysis
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:03:13 PM AEST
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True. Nice title.
Well said again. |
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Re: hemolysis
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by summers on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:26:29 PM AEST
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yes, its quite short though.
there's nothing i could put in to add to this poem. |
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Re: hemolysis
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 01:31:04 PM AEST
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| The title alone hooked me, the actual poem just made it better (lol). But anyways it was short but sweet and I enjoyed it. |
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